#a Shell To Be Cracked [senryu] Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

#a Shell To Be Cracked [senryu]

Rating: 3.3


we are more than what?
we are more than what we are
we are not just us

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 21 June 2009

Yes we must open up to grow.

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Sandra Martyres 21 June 2009

Nicely written - we are more that what we are! !

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Catrina Heart 21 June 2009

Its just a question of who am I and what I am in this world...............great 10+++

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Rajaram Ramachandran 21 June 2009

This appears to be a three line puzzle.

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Raj Arumugam 20 June 2009

brilliant! marvelous!

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Eyan Desir 25 June 2009

True in every shell there lives a story deeper than needs the eyes 10

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Sandra Fowler 23 June 2009

We are more than what we appear to be on the surface.We have a shadow self that is only revealed to the discerning eye. Excellent. Kind regards, Sandra

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Louis Rams 22 June 2009

there is more to us than the eye can tell.

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Lynda Robson 22 June 2009

So true Sam, there is more to everyone than meets the eye, 10 Lynda xx

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Ency Bearis 22 June 2009

well said and done......

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