#a Shell To Be Cracked [senryu] Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

#a Shell To Be Cracked [senryu]

Rating: 3.3


we are more than what?
we are more than what we are
we are not just us

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Priyanka Bhowmick 20 June 2009

true said...everyone got their certain capabilities..

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Carol Gall 20 June 2009

really good and so right

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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 June 2009

Marvelous write

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Marieta Maglas 20 June 2009

well written poem...10++

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Miriam Maia Padua 20 June 2009

great idea with deep meaning very true... we need to be cracked to come out from our shell to know who and what we really are.. great thoughts here 10++++ lovelots, maia

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Eyan Desir 25 June 2009

True in every shell there lives a story deeper than needs the eyes 10

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Sandra Fowler 23 June 2009

We are more than what we appear to be on the surface.We have a shadow self that is only revealed to the discerning eye. Excellent. Kind regards, Sandra

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Louis Rams 22 June 2009

there is more to us than the eye can tell.

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Lynda Robson 22 June 2009

So true Sam, there is more to everyone than meets the eye, 10 Lynda xx

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Ency Bearis 22 June 2009

well said and done......

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