*a Small ' I ' And A Big ' Me' Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
*a Small ' I ' And A Big ' Me'
I have these two in me
a SMALL 'I' and a big 'me'
they both co-exist in me
The SMALL 'I' is a pampered species
the big 'me' we may think is an endangered species
the SMALL endangers the big...we may think so..though
the big is a humble fellow...
he would never ever go
he is a different kind of fellow
The SMALL ' I' has a lover..dear FEAR
she would never let anybody near...
not even the big buddy for sure
she creates a sphere for the SMALL' I' to retire
the small fellow will operate only from here
the SMALL 'I' needs it all for dear
assurance..security..and all for sure
A day would come when she would be seen..
in her true colour
A day would come when the SMALL 'I' would
see the true picture
A day will come when 'LOVE' totally takes over
That day when
the small 'i' and the BIG 'ME'....
will start to live up to their name
you have coloured the poetic skills......very very very nice........
i like this one very spoken in our own words...as if it flowed out like how a river over flows a bridge...life like....
yes...very true....wonderful poem....everybody longs for that day... thank you.
Psychology in poem! i wonder what made you think as u did!
Two in one concept expressed very poetically and efficiently. Great.10+
This is clever and entertaining, Samanyan. Thank you.(smile)
Wow! I do not marvel how well you write I only marvel how deep you think And that thought you give form In the depths of your soul! Angel
the poetic difference betn I n me well compared in dis poem.. lovely piece..10 up.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 11:00:28 AM # 1.0.0
It was fantastic well done 9+ (: