Hey..
Step in rhythm
Stay in eyes
Soft as a smile
Sing some lies
Hey..
Chain my thoughts
Burn my woes
Evaporate all
Tears in rows
Hey..
Calm this beat
Hold my hand
Take me far
From this land
Far inside
Inside deep
Deep somewhere
Out of here
Near that moon
And asleep
A wonderful verse, Ali. AS I read now a second time, I note a hint of melancholy underneath a rhythm and meter that suggest all is upbeat. I suppose therein is the metaphor for life. A great verse, Ali.
What a lovely flow n rhythm. This song goes straight to the heart n makes the heart dance with pure joy. A 10.
Chain my thoughts Burn my woes Thoughts come in endless succession enslaving us. When we are asleep, they won't come to nag us. To a state of calm and bliss, let the heart be lifted in sleep! A beautiful prayer!
A song that resonates. That moon is a perfect final note and a most calming image. Stunning poem, Muhammad.
Bring me there too, to the moon of no country that rules just hearts that landed with emotion full....nice song to feel free before sleep :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Near that moon heart beats to hold hand with tenderness and calmness. Chain of thoughts evaporate with thoughts. An amazing prayer poem is shared here.10