With colours, a splendid world that does lush,
Bright and romantic that has blush.
There the dove-like spring of love does gush
With purity truly divine and hush.
The trees grow in abundance that does flush
The soul clean in a mild way that did rush.
'The air keeps the place cool' so tweets the thrush,
And the cattle upon the grass they brush.
Nemesis the scorn that nature did crush
Is rendered to be harmless as a mush.
so rhythmically and it is filled with anticipating of nature... very inspired poetry
With purity truly divine and hush. The trees grow in abundance that does flush.....................wonderful exposition nature scintillating that blazes the glory of beauty, eloquent write,10++, thanks for sharing
The splendid monorhymes.................................a good write..............
you paint vivid and clear imagery with your poetic thoughts.... I enjoyed! J. L.
You have created a wonderful atmosphere, a 'divine' and 'mild' one! We've enjoyed the images across such artistic rhyming. Thanks for sharing.
you got the most splendid poem.... a simple, yet inspiring line to the Reader who want to find solitudes in life.....thank you and God bless a 10 +
You describes the splendor of the world with striking images with a fresh perception...and the rhythm of the end rhymes sound out on every line of this lovely poem. Suurly a 10
The trees grow in abundance that does flush The soul clean in a mild way that did rush. it so wonderfull and good poem with deep thoughs init...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow! Obinna you have used the same rhyme for every sentence. This is not easy, and is commendable, as you kept to the theme of a Splendid World. Great work. 10 Karin Anderson