A Special Gift Called Life Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

A Special Gift Called Life

Rating: 5.0


Life is a special gift,
Something you must be swift
To take care as you shift
Your focus to uplift
Your essence with the will,
You possess so and till
That joy may come to fill
It with bliss that does thrill.
Do so that life be fit
And be heavenly lit,
For with that kind to hit
To put sunlight in it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 29 May 2009

A sunlight poem about life...short yet rythmic natural rhyming lines...good work, Obinna...10

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Jasbir Chatterjee 29 May 2009

Life is, indeed, a special gift to be cherished, to take care, as you say in the poem. No one knows for sure what happens to us after we die; so Make hay while the sun shines, as the cliche goes.

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Howard Kern 14 June 2009

A well executed drive thru life. that is presious

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Jack Price 15 June 2009

I love your style Obinna, these are feel good poems and they are little shots of inspiration! great message. 10+ for me.... J. L.

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Lynda Robson 07 July 2009

Life is a special gift to cherish and make the most of, a very enjoyable read, thanks 10 Lynda xx

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Eyan Desir 17 November 2009

Well expressed.......................

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Bushra Hussaini 07 November 2009

simple, short but very creative! ! !

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 02 October 2009

I voted +10 for this poem!

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Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate 24 September 2009

a beauiful wise poem..so well penned

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 September 2009

Lovely and expressive. Keep writing!

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