A Start Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

A Start

Rating: 5.0


no other creature
seem to be
learning..writing..worrying
every other creature
seem to be
living

truely no other creature
is as gifted as us
we seem to be
the only one
who could relate and connect
who could know and feel our roots

leave alone living
we should be able to do even more
let's start with living

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louis Rams 26 April 2009

lets start living with all the love the lord is giving

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Barry A. Lanier 26 April 2009

well penned, , , living as the sparrow, , ,

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Kesav Easwaran 27 April 2009

truly a 'gifted creature' you are! great write...

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~ Jon London ~ 27 April 2009

A truely brilliant write Sam, solid crafted lines my friend

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~ Jon London ~ 27 April 2009

A truely brilliant write Sam, solid crafted lines my friend

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Bob Blackwell 08 May 2009

Yes we must not waste our precious talents. Other creatures do not have our talent, unlike us they also do not even know they will one day die.

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Raj Arumugam 07 May 2009

a wonderful poem to awaken the mind

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rago rago 07 May 2009

a well knit poem with beautifully woven words...... start........ let we start now..... thank you for your kind sharing.

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Vidi Writes 06 May 2009

'Lets Start to Live' A Great Call... Lets read this call hundred times To understand and to act. Thank you for this great call.

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Catrina Heart 05 May 2009

wisdom flows through the page.......brilliance!

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