A Sympathetic Contract... Poem by Vikrant Jog

A Sympathetic Contract...

Rating: 5.0


From that day,
We parted away,
Tell me...
You never missed me,
Tell me...
You never felt a tear roll up the lips,
Tell me...
You didn't knew my love for you,
Tell me...
You never liked me,

From that day,
I never could have dream,
Because I never could sleep,

From that day,
Till now,
You owe me,
My lost sleep...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yash Shinde 02 November 2012

very lovely...........full of emotions and love.............great work.......... :)

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Unwritten Soul 02 November 2012

Emotion is waving and it fill the atmosphere to be in dark, very nice written poem Jog, well expressed_Soul

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Shivani Misra 02 November 2012

Very nice.. U could have given a perfect ending.. I mean to say that it looks a bit incomplete.. *no offence* :) overall, the poem is a great write. Keep writing.

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Aung Si 02 November 2012

Very remarkable poem. I can't stand to appreciate you cos you are very good at composing poem. And very talented one.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 November 2012

Intensity of emotions is captivating. A good poem with youthful passion.

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Yash Shinde 12 March 2014

a heartfelt poem...dear...lovely..

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 06 November 2012

Sympathetic is necessary for humanity. you have written a wonderful work here well done

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Antonio Liao 05 November 2012

frolic of deep nemeses of truth... so loving memoirs of a true and lasting Love...i love it..God bless

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Hazel Durham 03 November 2012

A deep poignant poem so heartfelt, great write!

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Vikrant Jog 03 November 2012

Hello Shivani, Thank you... Would you please let me know what is left incomplete...

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