A Taste Of Hell Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Taste Of Hell

Rating: 5.0


His love came and left
Like a dust devil
Giving her nothing
But a taste of Hell.


Copyright 2018, Rose Marie Juan - Austin, All Rights Reserved

Tuesday, December 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 18 December 2018

When love and comes and goes away and she feels the betray of her friend then this is painful. This gives the feeling of. A thought provoking poem is amazingly penned.10

2 0 Reply
Bernard F. Asuncion 19 December 2018

A short yet complete touching poem....10+++++

2 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 20 December 2018

Typo - When love comes and goes

0 0 Reply
Prabir Gayen 20 December 2018

Well said.. Very deep....

0 0 Reply
Unnikrishnan E S 20 December 2018

Love lost is very harsh on the heart. Surely, it is.

0 0 Reply
Kesav Venkat Easwaran 28 January 2023

Powerful expression, Rose Marie. Glad the devil has gone back to . Nice poem. Please remove my incomplete comment lines.The mobile phone keyboard is playing havoc

0 0 Reply
Rob Lamberton 29 December 2022

Wow! Visualizing the desisted left behind! Powerful poem! !

0 0 Reply
Anjandev Roy 30 September 2019

Like a dust devil.......fine. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

0 0 Reply
Jankovic Zoran 09 April 2019

The of the wind can bring the devil dust. Dust the wind carries the way he wants it.

0 0 Reply
Bri Edwards 21 February 2019

That's what they all say (about me) . : ( : ( i'm misunderstood! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i like the poem. to MyPoemList. bri ;)

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
Close
Error Success