A Teardropp Too Heavy Poem by BEAU GOLDEN

BEAU GOLDEN

BEAU GOLDEN

Earth, USA, California, Los Angeles, Van Nuys, Balboa blvd

A Teardropp Too Heavy

Rating: 4.1


When you and I first separated
I wanted to run off and hide
I created discussions between us
I Strangled my love deep inside

I can't stand to see me without you
It feels so stupid and cruel
But if you and I don't stay together
Aren't we both playing the fool?

After living for six months without you
You showed up and brightened my life
I didn't dare say that I love you
I did ask if you'd be my wife

I can still see you looking so lovely
In a satin dress colored in peach
I was screaming inside to please love me
But u were no longer in reach

You sent me away with the flick of your wrist
I cried yes I cried and I cried
My heart said that you should still love me
My head said hey maybe she lied

Now time passes ever so slowly
I'm living a life that's a lie
I can't stand just living without you
I'm shriveling waiting to die

I can't go on living without you
I feel that my life is a flop
A teardropp too heavy starts crying
A heart that stays broken will stop
2-14-89

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 31 May 2006

You will be amazed at how broken hearts can keep going, but without the tick tock, it is an emply going Beau! I hope someone starts yours again. Hearts are apt to re-start without us even realising. I like the title and the poem is obviously heartfelt, ticking or no. Good expressive poem. Tai

0 0 Reply
Preeti - is here! 31 May 2006

Beau, that was so emotional...like Tai chi..i love the title too! One thing about broken heart is that they can be mended! you time will come~ Preets

0 0 Reply
Michael Gale 01 June 2006

Yes this poem is filled with an innermost pained broken heart. This poem is beautiful and perhaps that heartbreak will be replaced with another one who will be wanting your special feelings of love. A great write is this poem. God bless and best regards-Michael Jeffrey Gale.

0 0 Reply
Melissa Broomhead 10 July 2006

we've all been there before just because we're not in love doesnt mean it doesnt hurt

0 0 Reply
Chantelle Clark 14 July 2006

This is a really good read. Definitly comes from within. Keep on writing and submitting, your poems are definitly a work of art.

0 0 Reply
Fay Slimm 19 June 2009

This is a lament in the truest sense and with it's honesty it really pulls at the heartstrings - - 'I can't stand to see me without you' could almost be the title of a ballad Beau.... and the whole thing would no doubt translate well with music.... just the tenderest romantic write - - well done........10 from Fay.

0 0 Reply
, , , , , , 25 March 2009

i really love the flow and the beautiful phrases

0 0 Reply
Marvin Brato 04 March 2008

When we became unloved we feel broken inside, time will heal the wounds they say but aren't wounds leave scar of pain? Awesome poem of loneliness devoid of love. A 10.

0 0 Reply
Kee Thampi 24 September 2006

can't stand to see me without you it feels so stupid and cruel But if you and I don't stay together aren't we both playing the fool? After living for six months without you you showed up and brightened my life I didn't dare say that I love you but I did say would you be my wife? I can you know how to simply write and makes i as a feel of more than words

0 0 Reply
Lipstick Casanova 23 September 2006

What first drew my attention, was the title - the tears that must have come from your eyes, would have been entirely too heavy for one's cheek to hold. I can feel the pain dripping from your poem, and your aching heart as it slowly stops. You will one day find the person that deserves the other side of your poetry. You show such emotion in your pieces of poetry. -L.C.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
BEAU GOLDEN

BEAU GOLDEN

Earth, USA, California, Los Angeles, Van Nuys, Balboa blvd
Close
Error Success