A Teardropp Too Heavy Poem by BEAU GOLDEN

You will be amazed at how broken hearts can keep going, but without the tick tock, it is an emply going Beau! I hope someone starts yours again. Hearts are apt to re-start without us even realising. I like the title and the poem is obviously heartfelt, ticking or no. Good expressive poem. Tai

Beau, that was so emotional...like Tai chi..i love the title too! One thing about broken heart is that they can be mended! you time will come~ Preets

Yes this poem is filled with an innermost pained broken heart. This poem is beautiful and perhaps that heartbreak will be replaced with another one who will be wanting your special feelings of love. A great write is this poem. God bless and best regards-Michael Jeffrey Gale.

we've all been there before just because we're not in love doesnt mean it doesnt hurt

This is a really good read. Definitly comes from within. Keep on writing and submitting, your poems are definitly a work of art.

This is a lament in the truest sense and with it's honesty it really pulls at the heartstrings - - 'I can't stand to see me without you' could almost be the title of a ballad Beau.... and the whole thing would no doubt translate well with music.... just the tenderest romantic write - - well done........10 from Fay.

i really love the flow and the beautiful phrases

When we became unloved we feel broken inside, time will heal the wounds they say but aren't wounds leave scar of pain? Awesome poem of loneliness devoid of love. A 10.

can't stand to see me without you it feels so stupid and cruel But if you and I don't stay together aren't we both playing the fool? After living for six months without you you showed up and brightened my life I didn't dare say that I love you but I did say would you be my wife? I can you know how to simply write and makes i as a feel of more than words

What first drew my attention, was the title - the tears that must have come from your eyes, would have been entirely too heavy for one's cheek to hold. I can feel the pain dripping from your poem, and your aching heart as it slowly stops. You will one day find the person that deserves the other side of your poetry. You show such emotion in your pieces of poetry. -L.C.