A Tenth Poem by Jacqui Broad

A Tenth

Rating: 5.0


1.
It's not giving the
rich men's honey, it is to
give back what you use.
2.
I don't think that God
cares for money. After all
He didn't create it.
3.
Care for the nature
as God made us to care for
it, in the first place.
4.
Reach out to feel love.
By experiencing it
you can return it...
5.
If we treat God right,
He will open the windows
of Heaven and bless!
6.
A clear sapphire sky,
and out of nowhere a white
dove appeared there...
7.
Finding doors open -
I once thought were closed for me -
I let the Light in...
8.
Once a naked tree -
four years later it's a proud,
strong mulberry tree.
9.
Share your food with those
who are sometimes disguised
as angels of God...
10.
Turning inside I
can sometimes feel God soothing
away tears I cry...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 30 March 2012

Ten gems, each very meaningful and very wise. Excellent poem

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 13 November 2011

Miss Broad, , , , , ! ! ! ! this is a superb poem, it is really a fine piece of art...your excellent writing skills show in every poem you write.....its so beautifulllllllyyyyyyyyy! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Harindhar Reddy 09 November 2011

Yahoo! This poem is simply superb! You painted your thoughts, your words carry might. Whatever is the poem, Jacqui leave a trademark......... I love these for some reason... Once a naked tree - four years later it's a proud, strong mulberry tree. Eureka! At beginning everything looks trivial but when finish and furnish it. I will look remarkable like your mulberry tree! Splendid that you turned your attention at the nature. Loud claps.. Can u hear! Take this smile not for you but your poem he! he! he! :) :) :) :)

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Sally Plumb Plumb 03 November 2011

thought the 6th stanza was beautiful. Nice piece.

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Eric Cockrell 28 October 2011

beautiful statement of faith!

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