A Special Place Poem by Jacqui Broad

A Special Place

Rating: 5.0


In my heart's four rooms,
There's a special place for you -
I ask you, move in...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 08 December 2011

Brilliant write...2 chambers of auricle and 2 ventricles... Such a romantical action in medical idea room :) hahahahaha..keep writing something experimental my friend! _Unwritten Soul

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Jinal Oswal 08 December 2011

So cute :) I can occupy one: D.. Ok, I am kidding :) Nice write :)

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 08 December 2011

nice poem J..how big is your 4 room? ha ha ha...joking my dear..

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Dave Walker 08 December 2011

Really beautiful poem. Great write.

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Silentpoet Grl 19 December 2011

Truly beauty held in few words - wonderfully written!

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Harindhar Reddy 12 December 2011

In my heart's 4 rooms there is special place for you says Jacqui to harry! Now Harry says ' I have already moved in to heart and mind just matter of time when i come into your life! Be patient till then my Harriet! I am sending 28 pure snow colored African doves express my love in all the ways 180 and always 24/7 on this special occasion of your Birthday! Just return your smile back to my doves. Ha! Ha! Ha! :) :) :) :)

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Kara Towe 12 December 2011

Beautiful! Allowing someone to enter your heart is a very brave thing to do. You must be a very special lady. Love is not for the faint of heart, (as you know) . Thank you for sharing. May God bless you, and keep you always. Sincerely, Kara

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Vipins Puthooran 11 December 2011

hii, Jacquilene, , 'tis a g'd poem! ! ! Who knows whose attic of heart is vaccant here! ! ! !

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Crimson Love 09 December 2011

Few words need be spoken, when true brilliance is beheld in such lines! Deep and meaningful, The ones we love, permanently remain in our hearts. Fantastic poem.

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