A Thought Poem by soren Barrett

A Thought

Rating: 4.7


Freedom with responsibility
Wisdom with honesty
Daring with discretion
Caring without obsession
Justice with compassion
Just us with passion

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cowboy Ron Williams 17 November 2022

Clever wording, last two lines.

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Bri Edwards 17 November 2022

Actually the last line sort of made me laugh, gently. Ha! Good luck with THAT! 4 stars. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 17 November 2022

The first five attributes are good suggestions to live by. The sixth line is pretty personal; I'm blushing! bri ;)

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David Wood 17 November 2022

Absolutely right, a well penned 5*

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