A Thought Poem by soren Barrett

A Thought

Rating: 4.7


Freedom with responsibility
Wisdom with honesty
Daring with discretion
Caring without obsession
Justice with compassion
Just us with passion

Thursday, November 17, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: caring,daring,freedom,honesty,justice,obsession,passion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cowboy Ron Williams 17 November 2022

Clever wording, last two lines.

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Bri Edwards 17 November 2022

Actually the last line sort of made me laugh, gently. Ha! Good luck with THAT! 4 stars. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 17 November 2022

The first five attributes are good suggestions to live by. The sixth line is pretty personal; I'm blushing! bri ;)

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David Wood 17 November 2022

Absolutely right, a well penned 5*

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