A Touch Of White Poem by Sandra Fowler

A Touch Of White

Rating: 5.0


Millions of snowflakes gone, my poet friend,
Across the slanted February roofs,
You lift my hand in witness to whiteness,
That burns beyond the scope of human eyes.

The last rays of an old sun warm the bones,
Paint glamor on the windows of the soul.
I want to be a part of your stanza,
Forever and a winter, if I may.


Copyright, Sandra Fowler,2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 17 May 2009

..very flowery indeed...visual...we can feel it in our veins...pulse..splendind imagery 10++

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William Lindenmuth 25 April 2009

just as there is the last rose of summer, the beauty fowhat is last for the season or for life. these are someof the images we keep in our memories and in our heart. the certain subtleness of what tsands out and reaches to us. to become thatverbal photograph that you share with us, It was quite a beautiful image, I love in Florida, but grew up in New York until middle age, i remember winters and there are those images that i keep in my memory. A definite 10 sandra

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Raveendran . 24 April 2009

The poets eye sees lasting beauty in the passing flakes - that which burns beyond the scope of human eyes burns within the soul(brahma satyam jaganmidhya)

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Subroto Chatterjee 20 April 2009

.....The last rays of an old sun warm the bones, Paint glamor on the windows of the soul. I want to be a part of your stanza, Forever and a winter, if I may..... Sandra, I pray you do live for MANY winters, summers, and spring.... The poem sure does reflect the passing of time...richly passed, tho its autumn... Cheers. Subroto

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Myrtle Thomas 19 April 2009

Sandra this speaks to the soul, of a longing to just be, beautiful

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Eyan Desir 25 November 2009

Thats very nice....10s

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Lady Grace 01 June 2009

lines are well expressed..grace

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Obinna Eruchie 23 May 2009

lovely verse with a wonderful sound.

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Raj Nandy 23 May 2009

Sandra, a lovely piece of poetry! 10! -Raj Nandy

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Surayya Abbas 20 May 2009

Such a lovable poem.Words like flowers.Thanks.

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