A Tribute To My Master Poem by Abdulrazak Aralimatti

A Tribute To My Master

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In the first decade of 21st century,
I worked under a fine jury.
One of the wisest scholar of the city,
With patience, compassion and humility.
The time to me was of doubt and fear,
Him, I found, my life to steer.
I wandered with an unstable mind,
And found him patient, tolerant and kind.
He struggled for me to cure and heal,
With a great and great zeal.
He adored me with guidance,
And I gained in abundance.
A time came and I departed,
But with heavy hearted.
His efforts today I reap,
In high esteem, him I keep.
In dreams I see his face,
Eveready for me to embrace.
I found none, so compassionate,
My life to rejuvenate.
Men like him are less to be found,
His company a heavenly bound.
Through this poem I pay my tribute,
For my master's fatherly attribute.

Tuesday, March 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: tribute
Chinedu Dike 01 April 2015

Lovely tribute to a role model and a source of inspiration. I like the articulation of the poem and its rhyme scheme. A nice piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 April 2015

A Lovely tribute to a wonderful person, who guided you and was a source of inspiration. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading each lines.....10

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Kevin Patrick 25 August 2015

There are always great people in this world, who guide us and help shape us to become the best of ourselves, I have had teachers and spiritual aids who have helped me in ways that I could not have been, your master sounds like a wonderful person. Thank you for sharing

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Darlene Walsh 29 August 2015

It sounds like you had a wonderful teacher and mentor. I never had anyone to help me, and life was difficult when I was young. It is good that you treasure those memories.

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Soul Watcher 04 September 2015

Having a great person as a teacher isn't easy at all in these days, it's so hard to find so your really lucky: -) Nice poem, thanks for sharing.

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 May 2018

excellent words for the master of knowing self - I wandered with an unstable mind, And found him patient, tolerant and kind. great 10++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 March 2016

Him, i found, my life to steer! ! Nice tribute. Thanks for sharing.

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 07 March 2016

Beautiful verses and a great deal of passion and love for your guide and master shows your profound knowledge of life and experiences. A great piece of work.

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Navod Dilhara 02 March 2016

You have quite extraordinarily enunciated your deep feeling and expressions through out the poem.Great piece of work!

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Aabid Masroor 01 February 2016

Very nicly carved this poem is very true words to master

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