A Trickle Of Thought - 39

Rating: 5.0

A person with an
Uncontrollable mind
Never wins a battle.
He is like a balloon
Aimlessly soaring in the sky.
His head expands and pops
All on its own
In the cosmic darkness.


Copyright 2021, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

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Soran M. H 23 November 2021

part 2 and we control emotions with the mind. So every thing in moderation is the best stratiges in life, thanks for this important and attractive topic of poetry, well done, Rose

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Soran M. H 23 November 2021

like a balloon Aimlessly soaring in the sky

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David Wood 23 November 2021

Lovely poem, sounds like the people running out government aimlessly soaring in the sky, they're all full of wind. Too marks, you've described them perfectly! !

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Robert Murray Smith 23 November 2021

The mind must be controlled by itself. Those that can't are at its mercy. Can blame be attached?

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Indira Renganathan 28 November 2021

Perfectly said on an eccentric behaviour.....top score

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 25 November 2021

Wow dear Rose! This is a wonderful poem. A man with no control of his mind can never win anything. He is really like a balloon soaring in darkness.

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Thomas Case 23 November 2021

Wonderful poem with great imagery.

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Aarzoo Mehek 23 November 2021

A balance of both mind and heart is necessary to keep the heart sane.. lovely poem

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Soran M. H 23 November 2021

part 1 I understand the reality of your society, and you have the right to pay attention to the role of the mind in human life and societies, but on the other hand we have hearts the source of emotions and feelings and we control emotions with the mind

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