A Trickle Of Thought - 4 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Trickle Of Thought - 4

Rating: 4.8


Oh, how I envy
The birds that can fly
To distant places
They can navigate the world
Without fear of border patrols
They can even soar
To heavens above.


Copyright 2019, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Thursday, September 19, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 25 September 2019

Indeed, I envy the birds that can fly either, they can even soar to heavens above...... WOW! What a greatest relief! I could that once in one of my dreams, soaring highest above.........fascinating poem, brillianty worded, dear Mrs.Juan-Austin. Truly an inspiring thought. Perfectly conveyed. Up YoMyPoemList. A 10 Full Score poet friend

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 September 2019

Birds! ! ! Flying over, Everywhere! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 September 2019

An inspiring thought, dear ate Rose...10+++++

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Anjandev Roy 20 September 2019

Without fear of border patrols........beautifully penned. Thank u, dear poetess.anjandev roy.

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Shaun Cronick 20 September 2019

Beautifully written as always, simply to be a free as a bird. So pure and eloquent lovingly composed. Thank you for writing and sharing this Rose Marie.10+++ and added to my poem list.

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Rob Lamberton 29 December 2022

Birds evoke freedom…"They can even soar To heavens above" I like it!

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Varsha M 15 July 2021

Indeed freedom of birds. Everyone desires. We should maintain thiy freedom in our lives in all fields. A freedom that has no restrictions. Thoughtful one.

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Anjandev Roy 03 May 2021

Excellent write.....wonderful to read....

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 04 January 2021

Wonderful poem, dear Rose! How nice it would be if we were born as birds...5 stars

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Shaun Cronick 28 July 2020

A metaphor poem so might say about freedom of movement, maybe down to for the reader to decide. If you sometimes reread a poem you can pick up a little bit more each time from a different train of thought. 10+ and many thanks again good Rose Marie.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

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Laoag City, Philippines
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