A Trickle Of Thoughts - 50 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Trickle Of Thoughts - 50

Rating: 5.0


Young love is like a tidal wave
It occurs unexpectedly
Sweeps everything
That gets in its way
And the heart cannot even
Defend itself
It leaves oneself
Floating along with the wind.


Copyright 2023, Rose Marie Juan - Austin, All Rights Reserved

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What beautiful poem! On

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Susan Williams 10 July 2023

you have immortalized the tumultuous emotions in young first love! Bravo! ! None of us can forget or truly regret the agony and ecstacy of your ove. top marks

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M. Asim Nehal 10 July 2023

Very true, I fully agree, by the time we come to realise everything alongwith heart is gone.... TOO GOOD *****

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Floating with the wind - the trickle thoughts moves into a lofty height....Full score for this marvellous poem. And to my favourite.

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Wonderful poem dear Poetess Rose. Reading this poem, I am swept away into ocean of love.

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Indira Renganathan 18 July 2023

True. Such is love. A perfect definition of love rightly said...liked

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Rebecca Navarre 12 July 2023

Oh, how true and beautifully expressed, swept away by love and all we can do is pray! ... Beyond #ing+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 11 July 2023

A hauntingly beautiful poem.

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Nabakishore Dash 10 July 2023

Brilliant love Mam.

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2) You have captured the essence of teenage love very hearteningly. The underlying emotions make it wonderful and most enjoyable. Top score and added to MyFavouritePoems

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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