Young love is like a tidal wave
It occurs unexpectedly
Sweeps everything
That gets in its way
And the heart cannot even
Defend itself
It leaves oneself
Floating along with the wind.
Copyright 2023, Rose Marie Juan - Austin, All Rights Reserved
you have immortalized the tumultuous emotions in young first love! Bravo! ! None of us can forget or truly regret the agony and ecstacy of your ove. top marks
Very true, I fully agree, by the time we come to realise everything alongwith heart is gone.... TOO GOOD *****
Floating with the wind - the trickle thoughts moves into a lofty height....Full score for this marvellous poem. And to my favourite.
Wonderful poem dear Poetess Rose. Reading this poem, I am swept away into ocean of love.
True. Such is love. A perfect definition of love rightly said...liked
Oh, how true and beautifully expressed, swept away by love and all we can do is pray! ... Beyond #ing+++++++++++++++++++++++
2) You have captured the essence of teenage love very hearteningly. The underlying emotions make it wonderful and most enjoyable. Top score and added to MyFavouritePoems
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What beautiful poem! On