A Trickle Of Thoughts - 55 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Trickle Of Thoughts - 55

Rating: 4.9

Mother Earth will continue to rotate
on its own axis without me.
The celestial bodies like the sun,
stars and the moon will continue
to share their warmth without me.
But they were kind to me,
swayed me to love
and provided me with a path,
to seek my own,
River of Happiness.

Copyright 2024, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Sunday, February 4, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: rights,river
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nabakishore Dash 05 February 2024

So we must express our heart felt gratitude because they have shown us the path. o the river

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Sandra Feldman 05 February 2024

So tenderly beautiful and deep. Like a loving heartbeat to forever keep. Movingly, unforgettable

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Anjandev Roy 05 February 2024

Excellent piece....again....thanks for sharing...

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 05 February 2024

Bravo Rose-Marie enjoyed it very much TFS

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 04 February 2024

Beautifully composed and thought provoking. We each seek our own River of Happiness.

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Poetic Sky 06 February 2024

Outstanding poem...I will take it to my fav now.

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M. Asim Nehal 06 February 2024

A superb philosophical poem, we are travellers and this earth is our temporary destination. ****

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Bri Edwards 05 February 2024

4 stars ****

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Bri Edwards 05 February 2024

I guess I've been 'swayed to love' or something like it several times, and then swayed away from it several times! 'River of Happiness' sounds pleasant. bri

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Bri Edwards 05 February 2024

Rose Marie, The part about 'those things' swaying you sounds a bit mystical. Are you an adherent fo 'nature worship' aka 'naturism'? ?

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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