A Trickle Of Thoughts - 57 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Trickle Of Thoughts - 57

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How can I make the stars come
and dance with me?
It seems this darkness,
will continuously,
put its weight on me.
But my spirit tells otherwise.
It fuels me to conquer,
this forbidding darkness.


Copyright 2024, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Sunday, March 3, 2024
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 29 March 2024

as you bring light so so many hearts here on P.h. and I'm sure those who surround you too! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 29 March 2024

May your Spirit shine the beautiful light in your heart, this meant to be dear Rose Marie! ..

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Rob Lamberton 26 March 2024

Sweet courageous spirit *****

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 05 March 2024

Brilliantly done Rose-Marie Bravo

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Anjandev Roy 04 March 2024

Magnificent piece.... thank u.....Rose Marie....

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 23 April 2024

It takes courage to dance and dream in darkness. Beautiful and inspiring, Rose Marie.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 07 April 2024

Yes. Be the Light. You will succeed. Bold optimism, the message therein. Nice work, Rose Marie

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Indira Renganathan 04 April 2024

Night is the big challenge always and night means a lot...difficulty, struggle, loss, failure, sorrow...so on....to wish for the dance of the stars is to conquer the darkness first...indeed true...lovely thought so encouraging...appreciate this cute meaningful poem...tfs Rose

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Rebecca Navarre 29 March 2024

May stars fall down and dance with you! .. I can picture that! .. : ) Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 29 March 2024

Conquering the darkness that can shadow us... Excellently expressed! ..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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