A Trickle Of Thoughts - 60 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Trickle Of Thoughts - 60

Rating: 5.0

What you see in me is only
a trivial scratch of the surface.
The real is impenetrable,
sacred and untouchable,
like the roots of an enduring tree.


Copyright 2024, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Very good, Rose Marie. Enjoyed the series. Please continue

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Anjandev Roy 28 April 2024

Magnificent short work..... thank u....Rose Marie.....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 28 April 2024

Bravo R-M A lovely piece TFS

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M. Asim Nehal 29 April 2024

Yes only few know how to see beyond the appearance. Wonderful poem ******

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 April 2024

this trickle of thoughts - 60 a metaphorical gem determined words presented in full brilliance I enjoyed reading it time and again precious words about the impenetrable holy and untouchable reality

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 30 April 2024

Your brilliant poem delves deeply into fascinating, hidden truth. Thought provoking.

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Rebecca Navarre 30 April 2024

Expressed with such amazing beauty! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 30 April 2024

This is so awesome! .. Heart touching and inspiring! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 30 April 2024

Deeply heart touching and deeply beautiful! ..

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Rob Lamberton 30 April 2024

"like the roots of an enduring tree."

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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