What you see in me is only
a trivial scratch of the surface.
The real is impenetrable,
sacred and untouchable,
like the roots of an enduring tree.
Copyright 2024, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
Appreciate the adamant stance of a real human being
FINAL: is impenetrable. Majestic words in this gem of a trickle of thoughts - 60 I applaud loudest for thee, and bow deep into my knees, great Poetess.
A trickle of thought that flows like a serene, sacred river. Top Marks & To my favourite
Like a deeply rooted tree, the absolute truth is hidden in the core of your being. It cannot be touched or penetrated as it dwells in a sacred space.
Well Rose Marie, You're honest and it's exactly what I feel, and no way to see the root. Sorry I hardly come here. Best wishes ;)
Your brilliant poem delves deeply into fascinating, hidden truth. Thought provoking.
Expressed with such amazing beauty! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is so awesome! .. Heart touching and inspiring! ..