A Trickle Of Thoughts - 60 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Trickle Of Thoughts - 60

Rating: 5.0

What you see in me is only
a trivial scratch of the surface.
The real is impenetrable,
sacred and untouchable,
like the roots of an enduring tree.


Copyright 2024, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Sunday, April 28, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: rights,rose,tree
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 30 April 2024

This is so awesome! .. Heart touching and inspiring! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 30 April 2024

Deeply heart touching and deeply beautiful! ..

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Rob Lamberton 30 April 2024

"like the roots of an enduring tree."

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Appreciate the adamant stance of a real human being

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 April 2024

FINAL: is impenetrable. Majestic words in this gem of a trickle of thoughts - 60 I applaud loudest for thee, and bow deep into my knees, great Poetess.

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A trickle of thought that flows like a serene, sacred river. Top Marks & To my favourite

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Like a deeply rooted tree, the absolute truth is hidden in the core of your being. It cannot be touched or penetrated as it dwells in a sacred space.

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Yiyan Han 01 June 2024

Well Rose Marie, You're honest and it's exactly what I feel, and no way to see the root. Sorry I hardly come here. Best wishes ;)

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 30 April 2024

Your brilliant poem delves deeply into fascinating, hidden truth. Thought provoking.

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Rebecca Navarre 30 April 2024

Expressed with such amazing beauty! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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