A Watery Wisdom Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

A Watery Wisdom

Rating: 3.7

Flows from the dead
to read new trace,
losing numerous shapes
yet its identity forever stays.....


profound thought in those four lines....10

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Sathyanarayana M V S 03 June 2009

Deep and profound...........a well crafted small poem with enough essence

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Kesav Easwaran 03 June 2009

watery or not...wisdom must stay...must prevail...good thought out write

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Shashendra Amalshan 03 June 2009

this is a nice thought provoking one indeed....thanks for the words of wisdom..nice write... regards shan

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 03 June 2009

A wisdomful write......Keep writing and thanks for sharing this one. Best Wishes Naseer

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Gold Fish 16 October 2009

Nice poem. From the soil, we have originated and to thus we will ultimately return. For nature is composed of the same core elements fundamental to all organisms. 'A watery wisdom' that seeps down into the Earth to be recycled. Fundamental priniciples. Lovely read.10+

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Mark Nwagwu 05 August 2009

deep, to read new trace. fluid woderful.

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Ritty Patnaik 28 July 2009

dear vaibhav, who inspires you to write such wonderful lines? i am amazed you write so well, with the wisdom of a seer.god bless you always. ritty

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Nikunj Sharma 16 July 2009

This has depth and a meaning which a few shall understand.may take a lifetime...keep em coming

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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 June 2009

Vaibhav you could tell a lot in few words. But consider changing 'losing numerous shapes' to taking numerous shapes'. Just a freindly suggestion. But this is a very good theme u have dealt with so well.

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