Reflection Poem by Vaibhav Pandey


Rating: 5.0

I used to stare at strangers
strolling in serenity with
hatred heavy on my heart.
The reasons, repentant,
rattled my ratiocination.

Till the time transpired
the transition of thought.
In retrospection, I realised
that the rage residing in
my retina was nothing but
my reflection resonating,
reeking off their faces.

Rajkumar Mukherjee 15 March 2009

Dear Vaibhav, Good controlled expression. We need to retrospect within us only then we find a balanced judgement.Nice little poem Keep on writing. best of luck-Rajkumar 9

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Sebastine Humaemo 16 March 2009

too good..........lines done n a poignant way.........te way yu strtd t poem made me to admire t more............classic........10+++ sebastine...

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Mark R Slaughter 18 March 2009

Great piece Vaibhav - you describe well your mind's introspection. Mark

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Susan Bagley 18 March 2009

Wow, this is profound. You see what I told you earlier about your being so deep for your age. So was I. It is what poets need to be. A poet has a happy lighter happy childlike side and a deep philisophocal side and a romantic side and even a dark side. YOu expressed this nicely and I like it very much, I like for a poem to make me think 'I've been there, I know how he feels'. Nice job Susan

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Meggie Gultiano 01 April 2009

wow, this is wonderful.A deserving piece to be on top..Love it. Hugs, Meggie

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Chinedu Dike 26 October 2021

An introspective rendition nicely crafted with conviction. Well expressed thoughts and feelings....

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Eyan Desir 07 November 2009

Well crafted...good job.............

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moribund love 24 October 2009

very well said. finely penned.10+

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Sandra Martyres 29 August 2009

An excellent poem Vaibhav....on our own relection and introspection....

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 28 August 2009

nice poem, reflection! strong topic to be written..

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