A wave of love approached my boat,
A fresh breeze surrounded me nicely,
My memories should be allowed to float
And to sail away with the wave slowly.
My boat can’t find the right direction,
It moves freely back and forth – I keep balance.
Any returns are out of the question,
I take delight in the smoothing silence…
But the wind is stronger and stronger,
I have to master the rudder to survive,
But the frothy wave is higher and higher,
I was washed ashore, yet I’m still alive…
Sometimes it's very hard to keep balance in this boat but for sure even drowned in the sea of love we can be still alive or more alive then ever :) great write and nice to meet you :) Mił ego dnia Anna
Only the fearless and those who keep faith survive the deadliest of waves. Very inspirational!
The last line said it all. I see you as a strong woman - based on this poem.
wave of love approached my boat, A fresh breeze surrounded me nicely, My memories should be allowed to float And to sail away with the wave slowly. you wish to knit the lovable song in a verse of poem... in is in my heart
I loved it the way you say 'Ä wave of love....'! This is a beautifully written poem and has a feeling of innocense and honesty. Only if I could grant more than 10! ! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lovely work, Jolanta. Excellent imagery. Warm regards, Sandra