A Whimsical Dream Poem by Valsa George

A Whimsical Dream

Rating: 4.9


Poetry is an excuse to dream.....
When whims like wild flowers out of the void bloom
When emotions go off like ripe fruits from a tree
And heart swims like a swan down river!

As I configure words saying beyond what can't be said
I long to become an Ali Baba with the magic mantra
‘Open Sesame' to unlock hearts lying shut
With my feet on the ground and my head in the stars

Oh! The queer dream of a poet...! Do you see?

A Whimsical Dream
Tuesday, July 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: fantasy,poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 10 August 2020

Poetry is an excuse to dream..... As I configure words saying beyond what can't be said.....great write about poetry; excellently articulated

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Yes, the pain of configuring words to form a verse befitting the thoughts make us ambitious of a 'open sesame' capability.....10

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Soran M. H 04 August 2020

................ With my feet on the ground and my head in the stars Oh! A dream of a strange poet...! do you see?

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Soran M. H 04 August 2020

Very skilful in crafting powerful and rare poetic images. used a very poetic language to convey the message and the content to the readers. Well done, the dreams of the poet makes them feel optimistic.10/10 Excellent

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Soran M. H 04 August 2020

Poetry is an excuse to dream..... When whims like wild flowers out of the void bloom When emotions go off like ripe fruits from a tree And heart swims like a swan down river!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 07 September 2020

Poetry is an excuse to dream..... When whims like wild flowers out of the void bloom When emotions go off like ripe fruits from a tree And heart swims like a swan down river! ..........wonderfully beautiful..... :) , , , , ,10.

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Soran M. H 02 September 2020

Dear poet Valsa, hello and thanks for this wonderful poem, really you have picked up very attractive and powerful topic for you lovely masterpiece of work, these amazing poetic imagery are so beautiful and fresh, always your magical and rhetoric words unlocking hearts lying shut, well done and have a top mark 10++ * congratulations for being 270 on top 500 poets

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Soran M. H 02 September 2020

When whims like wild flowers out of the void bloom When emotions go off like ripe fruits from a tree And heart swims like a swan down river!

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Khairul Ahsan 27 August 2020

'Poetry is an excuse to dream' - couldn't agree more! Poets are dreamers, scientists are doers.

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Anjandev Roy 13 August 2020

.........like a swan down river.......wonderful.....thanks for sharing......anjandev roy.

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