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A Window Of Time 3

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I'm looking
out of the window
as I hear someone calling me
A young girl comes to the window
and says I'm your daughter Lily
from the year 2033

Your trapped in a coma
that's why you see
images through a window

that looks as real as me
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Sunday, January 1, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: art
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 12 September 2013

Wow. Wonderful poem. You are in coma like dream....Waiting for a sign..Brilliant write. No words can describe...

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Noreen Carden 04 September 2013

I am envious of your talent a brilliant write I will be going back to read all three again

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Heather Wilkins 01 September 2013

your in a coma like dream inventing the world you see. a good write

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Smoky Hoss 17 March 2012

Another good one Dave; an amazing and wonderful story you have spun for us...thanks!

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Danny Draper 29 February 2012

Dave, here at number 3, I wasn't expecting the ending although it does make sense as per the cycle of life and alternation of generation. As a series of poems it also reminds me a bit of the great British TV show Life on Mars, which is a good thing. Thanks for the journey.

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Aleksandra Szymanska 12 January 2012

I've read all the parts of 'A window of time' and this one reminds of someone who has gone through intensive care ordeal, abandoned by everyone... Can poetry bring relief to people who experience these things? Would they be pleased if they read few verses devoted to them? Thank you for the heartfelt read...

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shy beauty 12 January 2012

this is beautiful keep it up... please send me some more poems

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Dustin Catingub 12 January 2012

Wow! ! ! Having a long sleep! ! ! ! A nice poem! ! ! !

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Mehzabin Alam Naomi 12 January 2012

Truely amazing poem...! ! ! Great thoughts and well written..! !

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Life Goes On 11 January 2012

amazing poem very impressive

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