Darkangel Flyfree

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A Winters Night - Poem by Darkangel Flyfree

On a cold winters night,
filled with whiteness and sparkling lights
all around this small little town.
Houses with their chimneys filled with the flame of warmth.
The beautiful sky filled with northern lights of coldness up above
the mountains wrapped in blankets of snowflakes
falling from the night sky onto the ground.
All the little children laughing and making snowmans
filled with so much joy.
Sounds like everyone has the christmas joy
with laughter and songs of caroling.
But one person sitting on a bench.
A beautiful girl with tears of sadness
as if she has lost her christmas spirit.
I wonder what is wrong on this beautiful winters night.


Comments about A Winters Night by Darkangel Flyfree

  • Thoughts Of A PoetThoughts Of A Poet (10/19/2012 5:49:00 PM)

    awwww that's so good i love, it makes me want it too snow soon, (Report)Reply

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  • Aqeb BenazirAqeb Benazir (10/18/2012 5:13:00 PM)

    Everyone below me says everything...it's got life in it! ! and the scenarios depicted are very well structured. nice write! (Report)Reply

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  • Hamid NegahHamid Negah (7/27/2012 12:03:00 PM)

    very good i love it. (Report)Reply

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  • Hamid NegahHamid Negah (7/27/2012 12:02:00 PM)

    very good i love it. (Report)Reply

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  • Craig Mize (11/19/2011 5:02:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem and very well written. I was picturing a beautiful winter night and then enter this one soul that makes you feel that everything and everyone isn't that happy on jolly old Christmas (Report)Reply

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  • (De Va) (11/9/2011 10:30:00 AM)

    Such imaging, you are an amazing writer.....
    and as you look into the sky,
    see the angels flying closely by.
    never far from you or too high,
    Always holding you as you lie
    In your dreams of freedom by and by.

    hugs n blessings
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 7, 2011



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