A World Full Of Wonders Comments

This is a superb piece.....it pleases me very much....thank u, dear poetess

This is simply an excellent piece.....thank u, dear poetess...

Comments from you, Sylvia Ma'am, Dr Dillip k Sahu, Robert Murray Smith and Mrs Bharati Naik triggered me to write more of my real feelings in words with my limited vocabulary.Sincerely hope you will keep on your boosting with your poetic suggestion. and criticisms.I express again my gratitude to all.

Every stanza reflects your great optimism.All poems of yours and all comments are highly encouraging for person like me..I am not at all a poem writer..I started writing my experience and feelings only recently, during the ongoing pandemic.Totally new to the system

A very excellent expression of nature's beauty with Powerful meaning reflecting your positivity.

Beautiful depiction of nature.thanks.

An absolutely pleasing piece of poetry with a rich flow of thoughts and beautiful images.

Excellent.....love to read it time and again...

A wonderful poem! Extremely well composed! !

This is a superb piece.....thank u....

Yes Rose every word it spesks is awesome great. It actually energizes us to start all anew. This is really beautiful.

All these daily routine scenes: orange moon, cool breeze. rainbow, meadow, sunrise, has made a great poem and that is what the professional poet do, who made up a giant amazing building with little thing, yes you are right always little thing can make us happy, and that is the real world for creativity, Rose you are so close to the nature, that is why you are so nice and peaceful, brilliant 10+ and onto my golden chest..

The kiss Of a cool breeze On the face and strands of hair Like a wonderful promise That everything will be alright

Beautifully written poems need to be revisited from time to time. This is such a time. Thanks again Rose Marie for something more than wonderful. There's a profound purity in what you write and it's ethereal and eternal.10++. Take care good Rose Marie.

This poem speaks a lot on your majestic poetic ability. Brings in cheerful romantic images. Nature that gladdens our hearts gets glorified there 10+

The kiss Of a cool breeze On the face and strands of hair Like a wonderful promise That everything will be alright./// beautiful poetic expression

An excellent poem, brilliant lines conceived and written. Every reader will enjoy the colourful language here enormously. It was a true celebration to read this amazing world of wonders, Mrs. Juan Austin. Thank you so much for sharing these dazzling gems, one by one each a very beautiful pearl, absolutely a world full of wonders- God Blessses You and your beloved family.

Stanza Five The kiss From a cool breeze On the face and hair strands As a wonderful promise That everything will be fine. All five stanzas read and reread, beautifully chosen and formulated words and metaphors. I greatly enjoyed all five verses and such excellent expressions, this gem goes directly to my list of poems.

Stanza Four: The brightness of the orange moon That changes the night In a colorful landscape It gives a warm embrace For a quiet night. The orange moon is usually larger than the moon we see every night, and orange, a bit reddish, the same as blood moon, I reckon, that's why we get the feeling of a warm glow, the colour orange is a warm colour, just like we get a warm embrace. Beautifully conceived. I can keep dreaming on like this.

Stanza Three: The beauty of the rainbow That bent through the air After a big storm It renews the mind From an abandoned heart. Such a beautiful sentence, we know the rainbow, in the fortnight that I was in Ghana I saw it twice. Really very beautiful! So too this stanza, it shows finesse in the creation. An abandoned heart? ! Fantastic metaphor.