Abandoned Poem by Aqua Flower

Abandoned

Rating: 5.0


You've abandoned me
I am all alone
in this cold world
I am left to roam
you are not there
my life is in despair
as I hang on by a thread
I wake up in the morning
wishing I was dead

Lion and Tigress series
copyright @ Aqua Flower

Thursday, December 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: abandoned,coldness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 12 December 2018

Such sadness and heart! .. May the mornings light shine on you gentle and bright! .. Thank you for sharing! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++ Powerfully expressed! ..

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Aqua Flower 15 December 2018

Hello my friend, thank you for your good wishes and hope. Life is pendulum, it swings back in time,

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Carl Roussell 07 December 2018

So much loneliness - hold on to that thread.

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Aqua Flower 15 December 2018

Haha! I hope the thread is strong enough! thank you my friend!

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Matthew Holloway 06 December 2018

tears break upon reading this please do not give in my poet friend

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Aqua Flower 07 December 2018

Thanks Matt......I am a survivor...if I give in, it's usually temporary....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 December 2018

In cold world you are left alone. This situation really provokes thought. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned.10

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Aqua Flower 07 December 2018

Cold world makes us need a blanket of love all the time. Thank you for your comment!

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