About Me Poem by Ruta Mohapatra

About Me

Rating: 5.0


I am a little springlet
That has fallen
Into the great ocean of poetry
And has lost its identity

Still, I enjoy
Flowing with my fellow poets
Wondering at the rare jewels
That light up the dark ocean floor

Wednesday, October 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 11 October 2017

The identity lost soon regains power of golden moment in poetry ocean and even a little spring-let enjoys words of wisdom with dignity and duty. Tender light of this amazing ocean motivates mind towards super cosmic power. Beauty of poetry allows a person to sing for life and God. Rare jewels wonder mind. Values fill life with inner beauty. Ocean floor shines with golden light. An interesting identity is given about self and ambition in this excellently drafted beautiful poem....10

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Ruta Mohapatra 21 September 2018

Thank you, Mr. Mahakul!

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Bharati Nayak 17 October 2017

I am a little springlet That has fallen Into the great ocean of poetry And has lost its identity - - - - - A great write, thanks for sharing.

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 January 2022

Top score.

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 January 2022

Every droplet contributes to the beauty and greatness of the ocean. Of Poetry. Though, the droplet loses its identity, it is every such small droplet contributed by the smallest springlet that makes the ocean. Some too tiny, some a little bigger

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David Wood 12 December 2021

A very tender and light poem, my you shine in the ocean of poems!

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Chinedu Dike 09 September 2019

I'm inspired by your style of writing. You're very talented.

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Ruta Mohapatra 10 September 2019

Thank you, Chinedu! Happy to read your comment!

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Philo Yan 11 March 2019

It's not bad to be a springlet since each of us have to start from somewhere. :)

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Ruta Mohapatra 12 March 2019

Thank you, Philo!

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