A Lonely Star Poem by valentin savin

A Lonely Star

Rating: 4.9


There is a very cold winter time.
The streets are filled with snow,
A lonely star's shining in the sky.
I'm looking at her from my home.

The city's awaking from the gloom.
People scurrying to and fro, and shout.
I'm quite comfortable in my room.
The star is luring me out.

How can she see me from afar?
And why's she lingering so long?
Perhaps she is my guiding star.
It'll be a pity if I'm wrong.

She wants to quit the heaven's shelf,
To warm up in the bed of mine.
(Being sad and lonely like myself) .
I'll gladly give her bread and wine.

Tuesday, September 4, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Валентин САВИН
(стихи на английском языке)
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February 2,2006
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thomas Kane 20 January 2019

Excellent poem gets my gears turning this morning!

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Valentin Savin 20 January 2019

Thank you very much, Thomas!

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Roseann Shawiak 18 January 2016

Very touching, a little mystical essence emanating from the lonely star. Stirring the loneliness within, as it shines down upon earth. Really lovely and heart touching poem. Enjoyed it immensely. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 October 2021

Great piece! Loved reading it.

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Valentin Savin 21 November 2021

Thank you very much, dear Dr Dillip.

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Koena Mokoena 10 February 2021

Hi! Thanks a lot for reading my poem i.e i am alone, i am proud that i have changed your life. I have also read im a lonely star & it changed my life as i like to succeed alone. Koena

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Khairul Ahsan 05 April 2020

I have similar feelings as you have mentioned in the poem, when I look at a lonely star through my bedroom window or when I stand in my home balcony. That's why I could relate to the feelings expressed. A nice poem.

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Luo Zhihai 16 July 2019

What a beautiful lone star! Autoplay next video There is a very cold winter time. The streets are filled with snow, A lonely star's shining in the sky. I'm looking at her from my home. What a beautiful lone star!

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Valentin Savin 17 July 2019

Thank you very much, dear Luo.

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Prabir Gayen 22 February 2019

She wants to quit the heaven's shelf, To warm up in the bed of mine. (Being sad and lonely like myself) . I'll gladly give her bread and wine. .....beautiful imagery....

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