Accept Everything Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Accept Everything

Rating: 4.8


We have to accept everything
Nobody has to do anything
As it is made freely available
You just carry on……..

When nature offers free smile
Why you should be sad for a while?
When everybody recognizes the presence?
You also fall in line with its essence

It is joy around and you move by an inches
Flowers smile and trees shake branches
Air moves in with little speed and fragrance
You just look up and walk with elegance

Stars twinkle when sky is in deep blue
You may not know what is next due?
Crescent will appear and slowly emerge
Silver rays will spread and merge

Nature too likes calm and peace
Galaxies with stars live with ease
No one interferes even with axis
Still living in harmony already exists

What a day to start with early morning?
Brisk walk with speed and running
Fresh air and breeze to bright the face
Ready to face challenge and jump in race

Morning prayers with earnest desire
Nothing to worry and always admire
He is there to guide us to destiny
Why not live happily in this world tiny?

Every small particle teaches and advises
Cowards fall back and brave only rises
Continue to surge even with little means
Failure will turn into big and massive wins

Try to pick up what ever you can from nature
Everything hinges on little hopes for future
Raise your head with pride and say
Rest all will be history to pave the way

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 02 January 2010

Try to pick up what ever you can from nature Everything hinges on little hopes for future Raise your head with pride and say Rest all will be history to pave the way..........................simply wonderful write, quite inspirational to great height, as it tells everything how rave on this world by nature, great write,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Lean Punio 02 January 2010

it inspire me a lot! ! ! uh lala! ! ! god created world and every existence to praise him and to experience what life should be everything in this world has it own purpose according to his great plan... we must live in his word...in his presence... God give us serenity to accept the things we cannot change...

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Yelena M. 01 January 2010

We have to accept everything..a very positive and powerful message poetically expressed. Thanks for sharing and best wishes to you in the new year! Yelena M.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 31 December 2009

Accept everything as a gift of life.Excellent works Hasmukh!

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Meggie Gultiano 31 December 2009

a powerful message. Thanks for the nice thoughts.

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Maryam A. 14 March 2010

this whole poem was good, what caught my eye is this part 'Cowards fall back and brave only rises' ! great write

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Cheryl Griffith 02 February 2010

It a nice piece, I especially like the last two stanzas. Question, ' You may not know what is next due? is this a statement or question? Is it why you should be sad? or Why should you be sad? I like the phrase 'Look up and walk with elegance. I think you focus too much on rhyming that you sometimes lost the essence. You don't really need rhyme to create rhythm. Nice piece anyhow.

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Farah Aliah 30 January 2010

I have to agree...We have to accept everything but sometimes we don't want to...

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Antonio Liao 06 January 2010

i love the way you say...so smooth and soft for the heart....prefect....the.. i do of the eyes to read....God bless this poem....a 10 ++++

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Indira Renganathan 04 January 2010

Nice theme..nice wording...last stanza is superb

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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