Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 385,133 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Accept Everything - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

We have to accept everything
Nobody has to do anything
As it is made freely available
You just carry on……..

When nature offers free smile
Why you should be sad for a while?
When everybody recognizes the presence?
You also fall in line with its essence

It is joy around and you move by an inches
Flowers smile and trees shake branches
Air moves in with little speed and fragrance
You just look up and walk with elegance

Stars twinkle when sky is in deep blue
You may not know what is next due?
Crescent will appear and slowly emerge
Silver rays will spread and merge

Nature too likes calm and peace
Galaxies with stars live with ease
No one interferes even with axis
Still living in harmony already exists

What a day to start with early morning?
Brisk walk with speed and running
Fresh air and breeze to bright the face
Ready to face challenge and jump in race

Morning prayers with earnest desire
Nothing to worry and always admire
He is there to guide us to destiny
Why not live happily in this world tiny?

Every small particle teaches and advises
Cowards fall back and brave only rises
Continue to surge even with little means
Failure will turn into big and massive wins

Try to pick up what ever you can from nature
Everything hinges on little hopes for future
Raise your head with pride and say
Rest all will be history to pave the way


Comments about Accept Everything by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (3/14/2010 9:52:00 PM)


    this whole poem was good, what caught my eye is this part 'Cowards fall back and brave only rises' ! great write (Report) Reply

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  • (2/2/2010 3:54:00 PM)


    It a nice piece, I especially like the last two stanzas. Question, ' You may not know what is next due? is this a statement or question? Is it why you should be sad? or Why should you be sad? I like the phrase 'Look up and walk with elegance. I think you focus too much on rhyming that you sometimes lost the essence. You don't really need rhyme to create rhythm. Nice piece anyhow. (Report) Reply

  • (1/30/2010 12:14:00 AM)


    I have to agree...We have to accept everything but sometimes we don't want to... (Report) Reply

  • (1/6/2010 12:48:00 AM)


    i love the way you say...so smooth and soft for the heart....prefect....the..
    i do of the eyes to read....God bless this poem....a 10 ++++
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  • Indira Renganathan (1/4/2010 12:42:00 AM)


    Nice theme..nice wording...last stanza is superb (Report) Reply

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (1/2/2010 12:46:00 PM)


    Try to pick up what ever you can from nature
    Everything hinges on little hopes for future
    Raise your head with pride and say
    Rest all will be history
    to pave the way..........................simply wonderful write, quite inspirational to great height, as it tells everything how rave on this world by nature, great write,10+++, thanks for sharing
    (Report) Reply

  • (1/2/2010 2:12:00 AM)


    it inspire me a lot! ! !
    uh lala! ! !
    god created world and every existence to praise him and to experience what life should be
    everything in this world has it own purpose according to his great plan...
    we must live in his word...in his presence...
    God give us serenity to accept the things we cannot change...
    (Report) Reply

  • (1/1/2010 4:36:00 PM)


    We have to accept everything..a very positive and powerful message poetically expressed. Thanks for sharing and best wishes to you in the new year!
    Yelena M.
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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (12/31/2009 5:21:00 AM)


    Accept everything as a gift of life.Excellent works Hasmukh! (Report) Reply

  • Meggie Gultiano (12/31/2009 3:56:00 AM)


    a powerful message. Thanks for the nice thoughts. (Report) Reply

  • (12/30/2009 9:35:00 AM)


    Dear Sir, Thank you very much for this poem. It will be moved to my favorite list. I enjoy your work and I am looking forward to reading more of your poems. There are a lot here! This is a 10 for me and that means a lot. It is hard for me to find someone who is similiar in writing style and their poems inspire me as well. I thank you for your writing style..... J. l. (Report) Reply

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (12/29/2009 9:40:00 PM)


    this poem is an advice to some people... nice write! (Report) Reply

  • (12/29/2009 2:03:00 PM)


    i really liked this poem..its serene...advising one to not get caught up in judgements and examining things so intently that it damages or destroys the beauty and joy of the moment (Report) Reply

  • (12/29/2009 6:37:00 AM)


    it provides energy and hope for the day to come (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2009 9:27:00 PM)


    wow! a wonderful hope of harmony...so deep that my sphere of life.....
    rendezvous the beautiful tomorrow of my life... my success would be our
    prosperous banquet for your one of my best friend in land of poetry....
    may your poem be amongst the inspiring wisdom of these ages...
    may God bless you.... a star for you and a 10 +++++
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  • (12/28/2009 10:09:00 AM)


    Accepting everything is the chanting objective and success of life, anywhere without fail. Read and shared dear poet. +10 (Report) Reply

  • Melissia Ann Senter (12/28/2009 9:29:00 AM)


    It is hard to accept everything at times but I do Try to accept the things that come my way This was an excellent poem indeed thanks for sharing with me Melissia Ann (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2009 9:19:00 AM)


    I won't accept everything but this I will: this poem is great!
    10!
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  • (12/27/2009 2:15:00 PM)


    Faith in oneself is the mainstay…with acceptance = tolerance = endurance are qualities of braves…and winners…
    10+
    Ms Nivedita
    UK

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    Please visit my page and grace by your comments if please…
    niv
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  • (12/25/2009 9:39:00 PM)


    Exellent, visional, exhuberant and and illuminative, a nice peice of writing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 23, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, August 1, 2011


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