Achieve Poem by Dave Alan Walker
Achieve
Wrapped in a mental
image of one's self
with no way out
Caught in the crowd
walking towards repetition
into the same life
as everybody else
Unwrap yourself
leave the crowd
see what you can do
with your mind
and your hands
I agree, all about pushing the envelope. I liked the way you expressed it. Great write.
Oh how wonderful Dave, I love this one, being in your essence and feeling your own flow, just that. Thank you.
good advice to find out what one can do with their own mind and hands...
It is a call for realising one's potential and aim for bigger accomplishments in life than being run of the mill stuff. Thanks for this small yet amazingly beautiful poem.
Well said Dave. Taking the path least trodden, taking your life in stride and doing things your own way. Being your own mental image not anyone else's. Like this one very much. RoseAnn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 12:13:38 AM # 1.0.0
Great piece of advice poetically expressed in these nice verses. Excellent poem