'Acquired Label' Poem by Afzal Shauq

'Acquired Label'

Rating: 4.7


Being I am..
a child of Adam
as on the day
I, intented to step out
from the door of my home
chasing out for
my global siblings;

Alas..,
the rigid beings of
my own birth town
suddenly started gossiping
I’m 'an atheist'.. full grown!
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Poem By: Afzal shauq
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edited By: Catrina Heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
thylane loubry 28 October 2009

i love the way you epress you feelings sir :)

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Seraza Uzuner 28 October 2009

Nice piece of work, I appreciate.

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Anju Addanki 28 October 2009

A well written and short meanigful one.

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Sahar Sahar 27 October 2009

I like this poem and it is wonderfully written.....when we step out of home, which is our paradise we think about some very important prospects, being a mature son of Adam you feel some responsibilities....

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Amita Lama 27 October 2009

short and nice one.... keep it up

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Leah Ayliffe 21 November 2009

Great poem, powerful words!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 30 October 2009

I am an athiest, I think your poem is top draw.

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Rachel Butler 30 October 2009

'Alas.., the rigid beings of my own birth town' Rachel Ann Butler

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Sandhya S N 30 October 2009

Brilliant expression regards sandhya

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Ala Elouri 29 October 2009

Short, breif but I like it! . Nice poem and keep up your work. :) I Hope you will become famous in this website and people see your talent.

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