Adam And Eve Comments
To be blanketed by the shadows
Of our nakedness would be a joy
As it angers the g-ds for we are too young
To think this is right
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To be naked without shame because are sins are covered in the darkness, a poem from the beginning!
We are the night, matured age And the night will cover our sins Until the dawn arrives to expel us.....appreciated
Wo this is so literary. A sheer pleasure! So much poetic flair and depth. Top marks!
Amazing, LeeAnn. Yes, there is no innocence in the garden seeded with bombs. A fantastic verse.
Cohen would be proud. And so would Bruce Cockburn. Like a very fine aged wine, your writing continues to get better and better, LeeAnn!
Later they found that Arch on the Ararat area. You created an amazing poem about the first existence of mankind.5 Stars full, I have enjoyed tremendously. Thank you so much for sharing
By the way, as far as I am concerned, dear LeeAnn, God had chosen Noach and his family and He sent the Arch and made the worldly flood, so that a new generation existed upon Earth
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1/13/2026 3:10:00 PM # 1.0.0
Nice concept and presentation. God won't get anger for He has made us to function as Days and Nights only. Beautiful write