Addressed To Your Heart..... Poem by jibin joseph

Addressed To Your Heart.....

Rating: 4.9


Sending you my heart
In a package of love
Covered with sweet dreams
Stamped with trust
Sealed with care
Yellow ribbon of hugs
Tied up with a smile
Knot made of a kiss
Addressed to your heart

Addressed To Your Heart.....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sara Crandall 26 January 2007

Very cute. lol. It works on the women because it made me smile! Good job, Joseph.

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Qais Shah 26 January 2007

Emotionallly over rated.....like eating huge amount of choclotes......

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Raghavan Warrier 26 January 2007

This is an excellent write. The choice of metaphor and its handling reveals a masterly touch. All aspects of love is included in such a few words. Beautiful poem.

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Asma Bahrainwala 26 January 2007

a lovely poem, Jibin... i like the choice of the metaphor here and its well-sustained... the poem is succinctly eloquent! best wishes... Asma...

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Mary Das 26 January 2007

Wonderful. Expressed so much of love in a few lines. Write more.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 04 February 2007

A wonderful heart to heart presentation from JJ

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Suzan Gumush 04 February 2007

You have expressed the love you feel. It flows from your soul and I can feel it. Wonderful verse. Best wishes suzan

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Lipstick Casanova 31 January 2007

Jibin, I can see why this poem is in the top five hundred. This is an amazing tidbit of warm tidings. It's very sweet, and the flow is wonderful. For some reason, I keep imagining a box of chocolates - then the more I think about it, the more I can see little heart shaped pieces in this container held fast with ribbon and bow. The sweet delight inside, is you. Wonderful. -L.C.

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Preeti - is here! 31 January 2007

Jibin, who wouldn't like a letter like this? beautiful/sweet/cute! Preeti

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Ernestine Northover 26 January 2007

Utterly delightful. An excellent flow throughout the poem, and it was rather like losing oneself in a fabulously delicious creamy confection. I can taste it just reading this one. Applause! ! ! ! ! Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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cochin, kerala state, india
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