Sending you my heart
In a package of love
Covered with sweet dreams
Stamped with trust
Sealed with care
Yellow ribbon of hugs
Tied up with a smile
Knot made of a kiss
Addressed to your heart
Emotionallly over rated.....like eating huge amount of choclotes......
This is an excellent write. The choice of metaphor and its handling reveals a masterly touch. All aspects of love is included in such a few words. Beautiful poem.
a lovely poem, Jibin... i like the choice of the metaphor here and its well-sustained... the poem is succinctly eloquent! best wishes... Asma...
You have expressed the love you feel. It flows from your soul and I can feel it. Wonderful verse. Best wishes suzan
Jibin, I can see why this poem is in the top five hundred. This is an amazing tidbit of warm tidings. It's very sweet, and the flow is wonderful. For some reason, I keep imagining a box of chocolates - then the more I think about it, the more I can see little heart shaped pieces in this container held fast with ribbon and bow. The sweet delight inside, is you. Wonderful. -L.C.
Jibin, who wouldn't like a letter like this? beautiful/sweet/cute! Preeti
Utterly delightful. An excellent flow throughout the poem, and it was rather like losing oneself in a fabulously delicious creamy confection. I can taste it just reading this one. Applause! ! ! ! ! Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very cute. lol. It works on the women because it made me smile! Good job, Joseph.