Adieu Adieu Poem by Sonya Florentino

Adieu Adieu

Rating: 5.0


Life is day
And death the night

Light and dark's
Eternal strife

Soon it comes
That moonless night

Adieu Adieu
Oh flower!


© 2009 Sonya Florentino

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
nomad omnia 13 September 2009

It is a truly beautiful poem, Sonya...spellbinding. N

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Yelena M. 12 September 2009

I love the way you connect the beauty and light of a flower to the light force of the whole Universe. A beautiful and enigmatic one, thanks for sharing, Sonya. Yelena M.

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Susan Jarvis 12 September 2009

This lyrical little poem is mysterious, beautiful and has mystical aura of déjà vu - all in so few words - a marvellous feat! S :)

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Sandra Martyres 11 September 2009

A very delicate piece Sonya....which gently reminds us of life's eternal strife...

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Sandra Fowler 09 September 2009

Fragile, lyric beauty. The fall of even one flower diminishes the earth. Very touching. Love, SandraX

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Mifael Llauderes 12 October 2009

i miss these things.. very short poem but life-sized and eternal. just dropped by for some readings.

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Kesav Easwaran 20 September 2009

the inevitable final 'goodbye' to life...wonderful piece Sonya...creative to the core...thanks...10

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Fay Slimm 20 September 2009

Surprise ending Sonya - - and what a wonderful discovery to find this tender and lyrical poem is a tribute to the humble flower.... without which this earth would be a far darker place - - thank you..; ..10 + + + Fay

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 September 2009

Strong and awesome. Keep writing!

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Alison Cassidy 15 September 2009

Your final line is as astonishing as it is brilliant. Those two words turn the poem from something very competent into something sublime. I am impressed. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sonya Florentino

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Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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