In my life there is room after room of good things
my man is one room for whom thanks-I-am-giving.
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I do not know what good seeds I have been sowing
but for not reaping from my bad deeds thanks-I-am-giving.
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Every day my life kite through the sky is tripping
and through good times and bad times is zipping but thanks-I-am-giving.
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The morning breeze a brand new essence is bringing
and blessings like flowers are budding and blooming and thanks-I-am giving.
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When adventure comes a-horseback and hoofbeats are reigning
then the hills are ringing and singing with thanks-I-am-giving.
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~©2011, (edited 2018) Susan Williams
While the new renovated site looks good and great some features are missing surely. Like I can't see which is your newest poem.
this can be a confusing site and this aspect has lost a number of great poets from this site
Sounds like it would make a great Thanksgiving song! Love it!
Revisiting this wonderful poem. One of my favorites. A virtue that we should all possess. The ripple effect of giving thanks is continuous giving. A wonderful offering that found its home in my heart.
That was wonderful to hear! ! ! To write something about our Creator and have someone hold it special in their heart- -there is absolutely no higher honor. Thank You, Rose Marie!
Flowing like a fountain and running over like a river is this thanks giving treat of a poem. Being thankful for the mundane manifestation of life is simple spectacular. This poem can change the world if its values are validated!
Thanking God for each day we are given tends to make us look around and realize how many blessings we have! Thank you for your encouragement, ny friend
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Every day my life kite through the sky is tripping and through good times and bad times is zipping but thanks-I-am-giving.....a unique poem. I like the way you have expressed things!
Thank you, dear Dr. Dillip, this was a difficult poem for me to write