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Saturday, October 29, 2011

Ahmed Khaled Prescribes Thorazine To Calm The Middle East

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for seven centuries..
you, middle east,
the old man of sorrow
dreamt of a sky..
raining gold
and of a sea..
bringing diamond
forgetting your own dust..
the man and the land
till the miracle happened,
after you sold the land
the two precious.., found
in your own dust as one..
and that one..
is oil
so you lost your calm,
and got furious..
aggressive and neuropsychotic
just about to be..
in total, schizophrenic
thorazine will make you calm
so take thorazine, middle east
and leave oil..
to the doctors.
ahmed khaled
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 July 2013
Hmm a fine poem, very unique n original. Pls do read my water poem.
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Claudia Krizay 07 November 2011
You know I was REALLY interested in this poem because I was diagnosed with schizophrenia when I was only 14 years old and Thorazine was the first medication I was given! This poem is very clever with a lot of truth to it- i LOVE IT! ! -Claudia Krizay
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Yeah. rich with resources, specifically oil, that which was there to benefit the children of chidren and the other generation of the Middle East, but anger and greed, yet perhaps selfishness striked in not only the middle east, but different ways from other lands, and henceforth the rumbling. nice piece, it will do some, to raise awareness.
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Yeah. rich with resources, specifically oil, that which was there to benefit the children of chidren and the other generation of the Middle East, but anger and greed, yet perhaps selfishness striked in not only the middle east, but different ways from other lands, and henceforth the rumbling. nice piece, it will do some, to raise awareness.
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Dr.subhendu Kar 30 October 2011
oh what a dust of gold to sooth sorrow to swoon to resonate again in heart panacea is still heals up to hale, wonderful write, ingeniously inspiring,10++++, thanks for sharing
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Sally Plumb Plumb 29 October 2011
Oil seems to cause all sorts of conflict. Nicely written.
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Unwritten Soul 29 October 2011
Thorazine has side effects though :) hahaha, could we ask for the best therapist? ? hahaha i'm joking, this write have smart idea, and the writer absolutely have good mind to write this.. :) Write more Ahmed, have your work n health go well too..! _Unwritten Soul
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goldtooth grin 29 October 2011
:) this has made my day :) great!
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free fairy airy 29 October 2011
The most effective prescription I have ever seen in my professional life of being a doctor. Nice work.
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free fairy airy 29 October 2011
'hahaha..nice.I like your conclusion. Why people dont understand anything?
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