Bri Edwards

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Akhtar, In Response To Your Poetic Message: ....[ Short; Inspired By " Welcome Bri. My Coconut Tree ", By Akhtar Jawad ] - Poem by Bri Edwards

Your poem's 2nd line stumps** me good;
I'd rewrite it for YOU, Akhtar, if I could.
But mostly I find your poem to be fine.
I sip it from your pen like a sweet wine.

Yes, to many, I, Bri, may be a mystery.
That's OK, as I'll go down in history.....
as my friend Akhtar's faithful teacher,
while he, for me, is a trusted preacher.



(February...1st...2020)


** stump[verb]:

"INFORMAL
(of a question or problem)be too hard for; baffle."

Topic(s) of this poem: friend, teacher


Poet's Notes about The Poem

He is older (and MAY BE wiser) , but my English is "better".Ha ha.

Of course I'd need HIM to translate for ME if I went to Pakistan! ! !

bri

:)

Comments about Akhtar, In Response To Your Poetic Message: ....[ Short; Inspired By " Welcome Bri. My Coconut Tree ", By Akhtar Jawad ] by Bri Edwards

  • Anjandev Roy (2/20/2020 11:57:00 AM)

    like a sweet wine........fantastic. anjandev roy. (Report)Reply

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austinRose Marie Juan-austin (2/4/2020 6:50:00 AM)

    Beautifully crafted write with
    great humor as always.
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  • Rose Marie Juan-austinRose Marie Juan-austin (2/4/2020 6:43:00 AM)

    A lovely tribute to a great man.
    Akhtar Jawad is one of the great Poets of Poem Hunter.
    Most of his poems are imbued with wisdom and insight.
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  • Kingsley EgbukoleKingsley Egbukole (2/1/2020 10:14:00 PM)

    Bri Edwards, lively and jovial. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 1, 2020



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