Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 26,613 Points (17.03.1965)

All Innocent - Poem by Lyn Paul

What has gone wrong with the world today?
Fighting, killing, This is not okay
Death for money, religion and greed
Pleasure from seeing people bleed
How can these people not even care
About Innocent lives; it's just so unfair
Will this war ever stop?
How many more bombs will they drop?
Let us hope it will all end soon
And these people will appreciate life's Beautiful Tune

Copyright Reserved May 2014

Topic(s) of this poem: war

Comments about All Innocent by Lyn Paul

  • Bri Edwards (12/16/2016 11:48:00 PM)

    well, Lyn, it's a fine poem, with fine sentiment, but from what little history i've read/been told of..........the world has been troubled since 'time immemorial'.

    : (: (

    bri :) ..........a smile for a better future?

    to MyPoemList
    (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Edward Kofi Louis (8/6/2016 12:44:00 PM)

    Greed! Like a reed blown away! ! With the wickedness of mankind on earth today. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (2/15/2014 2:00:00 AM)

    A nice message, until these devils are off, this earth won't have peace.. let's hope for best.

    You may read my poem Killing myself.
    (Report) Reply

  • Kanav Justa (11/22/2013 5:07:00 AM)

    .. a beautiful message for all us... liked it (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson (12/13/2012 2:32:00 PM)

    Such a heartfelt poem for peace, a well written hope for the future I`m sure many echo. (Report) Reply

  • (11/6/2012 1:32:00 AM)

    Lovely thought well put, Lyn. Too bad the world's not run by lady poets. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (7/23/2012 8:41:00 AM)

    Short and succinct, very relevant let's hope it will all end soon, very soon! ! Great write. (Report) Reply

Read all 7 comments »

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

Poem Submitted: Monday, July 23, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 23, 2017

[Report Error]