the lights go out.....
the city black......
all is silent.......
not a soul......
not a life.....
done........
now.......
go.......
wow. that was unique. first time i ever read something like this here. that was genius. i liked it alot
Frankly speaking I like it because it is short, deep and you put in a nice shape(taht of the triangle): human being is a traiangle of thoughts, feelings and behaviors... keep the nice write... wael
will i see a bright sunny afternoon those who leave tell me to be happy... yes u will and life is full of hope so carry on with it... read mine hopes against hope, nver say die and good bye
lol.... very very good... style is very good and you show you got plenty of it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
All rythmic, concise and meaningful, keep it up!