All Saints Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

All Saints

Rating: 3.4


Glacial winds
Winter Sweets
Can't suppress a yawn
Delicate fragrance
Fills the air
Though
They look pale and drawn

We are lulled
By the gentel wind zephyr
It emerges buds
A sure sign
Of serene skies
Sunflower does a little dance
With a spring
In her step
Prize

Burnished celestial orange
Summery smile
A mild fever
The budding friendship
Style

New emotion issues from the heart
The advent of the inner warmth
A momentous event
A serene autumnal mood
Spring in love
Fall's present

(2009/4/3)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 03 April 2009

Spring in love Fall's present.. .......................... Simply remarkably, very lovely...10....... Best wishes, Tsira

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Ency Bearis 03 April 2009

awesome poem..spring in love seems so refreshing...nice...10

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Catrina Heart 03 April 2009

seasons of love written in a very fine imagery here...lovely end lines and rhymes...10

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M M 04 April 2009

a very beautiful poem, distilled with delicacy and soft scents. 10+

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Anjali Sinha 04 April 2009

wowwwwwwwww a different mood of love for a different season. surely +10 anjali

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Simply delicious and delightful. 'burnished celestial orange' 'summery smile' 'spring in love' are images to die for. Loved it all. 10/10

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Sandra Fowler 08 April 2009

Spring in love, Fall's present..Yes, when we walk in the sun, we must always be aware of the shadows. You are very wise. Beautiful write. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 08 April 2009

like the way u express about nature

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Sid John Gardner. 05 April 2009

A good representation of natural elements, combined with minkind's awakening to Spring and thoughts of love.Well said my friend, Sid.

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Miriam Maia Padua 05 April 2009

lovely piece...SEASONS OF LOVE... fragrance is filling the air... in a soft, fine-flowing lines really a wonderful write...i love this goes to my faves 10+++

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