American Gothic Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

This is a good one, i like your choice of words. Keep on writing!

very good writing. I like this poem alot.

very well done.keep it up.

...a different style of expression....I enjoyed it......10

Nice poem, I like the dark, melancholic synomyms used in this poem to describe the gothic subculture. Lovely.

Your styling is great, its different and thats why i like it, you're a poet my friend. Keep creating that voice Best wishes Jon

I like it alot. its very unique

Again, your style is unusual, and takes getting used to.

I am not familiar with all of these people and so cannot appreciate every thing that is said and I haven’t yet caught on to all the meanings intended: ex., a girl clever escape faith's power I will have to do more reading I see.

Hey, this it is a good one, i like the way how you wrote it and the use of those few words, you did a lot with them....great.....