# Amidst..... Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# Amidst.....

Rating: 3.4


sitting amidst thorny bushes
with not a tree or leaf around
where from comes this lovely breeze

standing amidst warring humans
with not a bird or tweeter around
where from comes this lovely song

where from
this lovely breeze
this lovely song
in a poem form

POETRY KEEPING ME IN SANITY
AMIDST ALL OF LIFE'S TRAGEDIES

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 30 September 2009

a powerful representaion.10 shan

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Deepti Agarwal 30 September 2009

beautiful representation of your poetic thoughts... good.. :)

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Raj Arumugam 29 September 2009

a lovely insight into our poetic moments

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Kesav Easwaran 28 September 2009

great poetic effort...thanks

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Bob Blackwell 28 September 2009

There is always beauty in our world, what you have written is so true, for beauty has to be inside of us to be seen. Bob 10

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Ramin Chaman 07 October 2009

A nice poem...too But I sit amidst a patch of wheat..

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C. P. Sharma 03 October 2009

Sam, You can hear the eternal gong, So, now you sing the divine songs. CP

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Joseph Poewhit 03 October 2009

I'm with you on the sanity part

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Sandra Fowler 01 October 2009

Poetry is a treasure. Your struggle is not in vain for you are an excellent wordsmith. May the music never end.10/10. Warm wishes, Sandra

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Sarwar Chowdhury 30 September 2009

the way you thought, it shows you are endowed with wisdom dear friend! 10+

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