An Advice Poem by Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Good advice that everyone should heed.

Put quite simply do not tamper with destiny, It gets the point across if my interpretation is correct a ten for content!

Hi, Akmal. I do agree that your advice is useful. But let me ask that if there is a particular reason you ask me to check out certain poems of your own, having just rated a particular one of mine-in this case one about the extinction of a species due to global warming, that in my opinion is due to a combination of the greed of big oil and our love of engines that ease our already easy lives (especially here in the US, where we obviously use way too much fuel for recreational needs and needless travel.) That 'polar bear' poem contained no advice, because the oil people care nothing about wildlife, only their profit margins.

Life is beautiul why do you search for stones in curd? great piece of advice.Marks10

great descriptive write, flows very well.very punchy in style, a message, and a lesson, /10

this is a really nice and meaningful poem. thanks for showing it to me.

I love to read this poem... it is very stylish in mocking the heat of envy & jealousy in human and how it could damage the person within... Such a good poem with a new way to say... hush the fool...! ! ! Well done my friend...! ! !

Great advice....specially the last line is highly applaudable....10

A very nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.

Sound advice as we travel down life's highway, Dorian Grey sold his soul I would rather stick to your advice and enjoy life' reward, excellent words to follow+++++10