Thoroughly magically blended,
To caress my ears as intended,
Through beauty and soulful sounds,
In my defense it softly rebounds...
An angel and a classical violin,
The century's concerto begins,
Plays like one hundred and one,
A million stars around the sun...
Soothing my heart and mind,
Finally leaving sorrow behind,
By helping me forget the past,
Only the good memories last...
An angel with streaming hair,
A beauty that lovingly stares,
Sparkling eyes, baby soft skin,
She orchestrated sounds again...
Her unique heartbeat clearly cast,
A conductor's baton circles fast,
We awake from a too real dream,
To rise to the top as a stronger beings..
New York's Philharmonic Symphony,
Is where the angels play in harmony,
Her bow glides softly over the strings,
With a sound of tenderness she sings...
To wish but it is only about reality,
Poetically, God's only soul for me,
But, when I fail to fall asleep,
There is no angel behind the violin...
When the sun rises I go about my day,
Her melancholy glow guides the way,
Anxiously awaiting darkness to begin,
Lovely dreams the angel comes again...
Life manifests itself in different forms,
The one behind my thoughts and poems,
The one I saw vividly in my dream,
The angel behind the violin...
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Your poem glides softly over heart strings Its intoxicating more than a million drinks. I specially loved the last stanza that says it all. CP
Hi Romeo - A very well constructed poem with an intriguing title and equally intriguing content. I have three grandaughters who are all Professional Classical Musicains and for me Classical music has a very spiritual and mystical quality. This is the distillation of melody - progression - harmony which creates a synphony. In Verses 1 to 3 we see the perceive power of classical music to sooth and even erase past bad memories. In Verses 4 to 6 We meet the imagined 'Angel with the violin' who orchestrates the cathartic rhythms. In Verses 7 to 9 she materialises (with her 'Band of Angels') in the NY Philharmonic bt in reality she only appears 'In the lovely dreams' where the 'Angel comes again'. We return to reality in Verse 10. 'Life manifests itself in different forms' - Our thoughts - our poems and our dreams. Thanks for sharing - Yours in Poetry - JOHN.
this is a really good poem that helps the imagination creates the imagery to the words. great job :)
Wow a very intense and soothing poem. I read it with a headache and for that moment it faded away. Great imagery and choice of words. Thanks for sharing and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! ! ~Xeniyah
Good imagery and thoughtful, very creatively written... Thanks for sharing Romeo!
A beautiful poem expressing the beauty of love with vivid detailing... very nice You may read my poem An angel in the night.
This is beautiful and well expressed. I love the violin and used to go to concerts -I love Mendelssohn's violin concerto- what an enchanting instrument! And what an enchanting poem you wrote-10+++
I love your lyrical style.What is marvellous in poetry, is the unlimited wave of imagination! You know how to put climax, and that makes your poem, have much beauty!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
you painted a truly beautiful picture here. it takes talent to write the way u do, actually following rhyme and reason instead of just spattering words on a piece of paper. writing is an art all it's own which ppl tend to be far more critical about.