As the sea rose up and down wind and tempest tossed
Hands on board began to shout we'll be forever lost
The captain of the wavering ship began to take a stance
Set the sails and man the helms there'll be no other chance
Sea waves became so violent as if they had no fear
Some sailors manned the front and others covered the rear
The ship began rocking to and fro on top of the rugged sea
None could ever have imagined how an angry sea could be
They said to one another we must act quickly to be saved
Fear began to grip some then others soon ranted and raved
Water began to rush in and covered the deck round about
We must all abandon ship and they soon began to bail out
They threw their rafts into the water and shouted with a roar
Then jumped overboard and stuck together then soon began to oar
Their ship began to waver and started very slowly to sink
The Lord of the Seas had spoken as they all began to think
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Nice and captivating imagery ma'am! I felt like seeing Life of Pie!
as they saw the ship sinking below the wave, they knew right then that GOD had came how else could they have survived if he had not been by their side.
Again i read this poem, and its beauty never fades..thats what i can feel and thats what i cant deny...Beautiful wonderful poem :)
A great story teller I see. Well written and I enjoy your poems.
Most impressive. In its simplicity it contains great depth and thought.
A particular event that is shipwreck is beautifully made as poem and all its seriousness and happenings.
Absolutely beautiful poem.It was as if I was on that ship before it was abandoned.Very visual and detailed.Love it!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Amazing poem. I could see the fear of the crew in your poem..very vivid writing..