An Astral Kiss. Poem by Fay Slimm

An Astral Kiss.

Rating: 5.0


Beginning in the mind, engaging sight
With words, though written, having greater draw
Of spirit, and over-ridden with mighty
Sword-like slices, hack my unconcern before
Exploding, and I am un-masked. To know you
More becomes my task. Aims take a special shape
Being nearer you becomes real joy. Start undoing
And arranging daily duty, to re-make
Opportunity. Listening then closer still
To meanings of each line, and divining
From the flow a soul-link closeness, fills
Every day with assurance that you're mine
And I am yours. Delight in knowing this
Sustains my heart. Thus starts an astral  kiss.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 31 January 2009

Very beautiful, and gentle the poems, expensive... 10x10 Thank you, Fay Tsira

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Kris Smith 31 January 2009

That is a beautiful write Fay so well put together and full of happiness thanks Chris 10 ++

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Catrina Heart 31 January 2009

words rain in colours on the windowpane, warming your heart... draw your souls closer each day...there starts a love so heavenly.......... beautiful poem...10/10

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 31 January 2009

Sounds like a heavenly kiss...10

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Juneil Sechico 12 February 2009

Nice imagination gal! mwahhh!

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thats the kiss I am talking about. perfect everytime

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Ann Beard 02 February 2009

Out of this world Fay beautiful. Kind regards Ann

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Fiona Davidson 31 January 2009

This is sheer beauty Fay....thank you...Fi

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Viola Grey 31 January 2009

I love that this goes deeper than simple awareness...if I could astral travel, I know exactly who I'd aim a kiss at...nice write Fay.

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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